Description - Outline
I. MAIN IDEA
Who? Chris Tsai Where? In the McDonald's When? 10/20
II. BODY
She is from Taichung City. She has a sister and a brother. Her mother is a housekeeper and her father is a fireman.
She came to Kaohsiung 5 years ago.
She lives with her friend, Mandy.
She studies in Wenzao. She enjoys translation, linguistics and teaching course.
Her goal is to study in the U.S. and become an English teacher.
She misses her family very much so she go home every week.
She likes to watch TV, listen to Japanese cartoon's music.
She wants to get married to a good man about 25 years old.
She doesn't drink alcohol and smoke.
She likes to help people very much. She also likes smiling all the time.
She never gets angry.
She is a good and nice person.
She is good to everyone.
It is very easy to be a friend with her.
I enjoy talking with her. I can tell everything to her.
We will be a very good frined forever.
III. CONCLUSION
I can learn a lot from her because she is a very good model from me.
She teaches me that I should keep smile to everybody and help people as much as I can.
I enjoy our time together because we have a lot of things to talk.
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3 Comments:
OK. You can prepare to write your essay. Yet, watch your grammar, esp. the agreement of subject and verb. There are some sentences I do not understand. Please check with me.
Your outline is good. After loking your outline, I am looking forward to your essay.
"listen to Japanese cartoon's music"
this sentence is a little bit strange.
maybe you can give more examples about her, let us know how nice she is.
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